Marinshe, I took some time to look at your gallery before, I wrote the critique. you have some really great work. very clean and interesting subject matter. everything has a very fantastic/surreal quality to it which I really like.
with this image, I like several things, I love the feeling of peering through the leafs, I really like the seductive look that the model has. One thing that i am not sure I like is the hue of the image. from it has way too much yellow in it. I know you probably did this on purpose, but for me, I would prefer to see a more natural skin tone. she is such a pretty girl that the sickly yellow I think is a little unbecoming. the skin tone thing is something that I noticed across he board, each set of images seemed to be very off from every other set. I think if you can try to bring the skin tones in so that there is not such a wide range across the gallery you would have a fantastic portfolio. all in all your images are Great, i will definitely be watching you form now on.
with this image, I like several things, I love the feeling of peering through the leafs, I really like the seductive look that the model has. One thing that i am not sure I like is the hue of the image. from it has way too much yellow in it. I know you probably did this on purpose, but for me, I would prefer to see a more natural skin tone. she is such a pretty girl that the sickly yellow I think is a little unbecoming. the skin tone thing is something that I noticed across he board, each set of images seemed to be very off from every other set. I think if you can try to bring the skin tones in so that there is not such a wide range across the gallery you would have a fantastic portfolio. all in all your images are Great, i will definitely be watching you form now on.
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